tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1575055354011824639.post668928303588790836..comments2023-10-09T09:23:27.905-04:00Comments on The Veteran Experience - by Ben Shaw: High Country, Part IVBen Shawhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08280885836684955658noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1575055354011824639.post-22526457777497434712009-04-28T22:00:00.000-04:002009-04-28T22:00:00.000-04:00Better. I'm glad Tim coughed this time. Talking ...Better. I'm glad Tim coughed this time. Talking was good. No monologues this time. People feeling things other than cold. Better.Elizabethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07763209657254848735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1575055354011824639.post-32486030392397913022009-04-28T16:30:00.000-04:002009-04-28T16:30:00.000-04:00Your writing is getting better as you go. Keep goi...Your writing is getting better as you go. Keep going. And don't take too long with the next part!! :)<br /><br />Good stuff. A cowboy story with no gun slinging, fighting, not even any women. You have to write well to keep people interested in something so simple.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1575055354011824639.post-9446165120188002062009-04-28T15:37:00.000-04:002009-04-28T15:37:00.000-04:00I just started reading from Part 1. Very impressi...I just started reading from Part 1. Very impressive writing. I will continue reading as soon as the next Part is ready!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1575055354011824639.post-59681508839617903422009-04-28T00:04:00.000-04:002009-04-28T00:04:00.000-04:00I thought there were no stampedes out there. Cool...I thought there were no stampedes out there. Cool. Good way to set it up!SilverPoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12340456181501341820noreply@blogger.com